Alright so the un-colored outline looks better than it does colored in... It makes me kinda sad because i spent so much time coloring it. Anyway you can find the outline in my scraps. [link]
The hiragana in the image says "Takeshitadori" its a street in Tokyo where all the teens love to hangout and the fashion there is crazy... i hope i wrote it out right >_<
I used a reference for the pose of the girl..
thanks plastikstars
go check out her stuff!! [link]